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OH MY GOSH, UPDATE: Fixed some anatomy, regarding:
Finn: Neck, shoulders, arms
Gage: Jaw, neck, shoulders, torso (I'LL FINISH YOUR ARM, I PROMISE).
Jiya: Face, arms/torso
Susan: Eyes
Nikki: Eyes, shoulders/torso
Jack: Hair (Nooooowww he looks like himself)
Jeevan: Hair (Y U NO PERFECT?
) I need feedback on his hair. Definitely. Does it look weird now? Pfffttt.
I'm sure you all hate me.
RETURN OF THE CHARACTER BUSTS, DAMN IT.
So, obviously this isn't done. Pffft. I think that some of these are absolutely finished, and others . . . I'm not so sure about. I'm either going to have to fix them (especially eyes, for whatever reason), or completely redraw them. The blank space is reserved for a character who I feel needs a makeover. So, currently I'm sketching out some different designs for her.
Top Row: Jeevan, Casey, Jiya, Susan, Jackie
Bottom Row: Nikki, Jack, Gage, Winry (not pictured), and Finn.
This is kind of a revamp of this:
Only difference is the set up, and the fact that I switched out a lesser known character for a character that more people are aware of. Pfft.
WELL. It looks like I've gotten better at noses. Annnnd jaw lines. Kind of. And eyes, I guess. O__o
AND HAIR. Oh god, hair. I think.
Derp.
I'll color this when I figure it all out. Feedback on the way they look would be helpful. Like, suggestions and what-not. Yeah. D8
Also, Jiya is . . . so difficult to draw. I mean, she's this cute little Asian lady . . . but at the same time she needs to look like an adult, yet pull off the more rounded face, I think. I gave her more formal clothes in my attempt to make her look older.
It could also be the fact that most Asian women just . . . look younger. I dunno. At least on the Internet, which can be very misleading. O__o
I don't know whether or not I like how Jack turned out. He's been giving me difficulties lately. FFFTTT. And Jeevan's jaw line is such a pain in the ass. First I drew it too broad, and now it may be too thin. URRGGHH.
Finn: Neck, shoulders, arms
Gage: Jaw, neck, shoulders, torso (I'LL FINISH YOUR ARM, I PROMISE).
Jiya: Face, arms/torso
Susan: Eyes
Nikki: Eyes, shoulders/torso
Jack: Hair (Nooooowww he looks like himself)
Jeevan: Hair (Y U NO PERFECT?
) I need feedback on his hair. Definitely. Does it look weird now? Pfffttt. I'm sure you all hate me.
RETURN OF THE CHARACTER BUSTS, DAMN IT.
So, obviously this isn't done. Pffft. I think that some of these are absolutely finished, and others . . . I'm not so sure about. I'm either going to have to fix them (especially eyes, for whatever reason), or completely redraw them. The blank space is reserved for a character who I feel needs a makeover. So, currently I'm sketching out some different designs for her.
Top Row: Jeevan, Casey, Jiya, Susan, Jackie
Bottom Row: Nikki, Jack, Gage, Winry (not pictured), and Finn.
This is kind of a revamp of this:
Only difference is the set up, and the fact that I switched out a lesser known character for a character that more people are aware of. Pfft. WELL. It looks like I've gotten better at noses. Annnnd jaw lines. Kind of. And eyes, I guess. O__o
AND HAIR. Oh god, hair. I think.
Derp.
I'll color this when I figure it all out. Feedback on the way they look would be helpful. Like, suggestions and what-not. Yeah. D8
Also, Jiya is . . . so difficult to draw. I mean, she's this cute little Asian lady . . . but at the same time she needs to look like an adult, yet pull off the more rounded face, I think. I gave her more formal clothes in my attempt to make her look older.
It could also be the fact that most Asian women just . . . look younger. I dunno. At least on the Internet, which can be very misleading. O__o I don't know whether or not I like how Jack turned out. He's been giving me difficulties lately. FFFTTT. And Jeevan's jaw line is such a pain in the ass. First I drew it too broad, and now it may be too thin. URRGGHH.
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Looking better! 
Just a couple more things me and Stacie noticed (she said she noticed you updated so I came back to look. XD)
Some of the shoulders are off. Here's a tip on how the shoulders should be measured: Take the width of the head, and the length of the shoulder should be twice that.
Also, the sternum (look it up, it's an important part of the chest) is also as long as the width of the head.
Also, maybe practice drawing ribcages and keep an eye on where that tenth rib is. (I can tell it's off on Gage, on the right side next to his arm. Both sides of his waist are going in, which in real life, one side should be going the other way... if that makes any sense.) Oh, and the pecs on Gage are too high.
But it's looking really good so far!
Just a couple more things me and Stacie noticed (she said she noticed you updated so I came back to look. XD)
Some of the shoulders are off. Here's a tip on how the shoulders should be measured: Take the width of the head, and the length of the shoulder should be twice that.
Also, the sternum (look it up, it's an important part of the chest) is also as long as the width of the head.
Also, maybe practice drawing ribcages and keep an eye on where that tenth rib is. (I can tell it's off on Gage, on the right side next to his arm. Both sides of his waist are going in, which in real life, one side should be going the other way... if that makes any sense.) Oh, and the pecs on Gage are too high.
But it's looking really good so far!